SUBJECT: Lesson #4 - Fire up Your Copy! {!firstname_fix} Use words that fire the imagination, and please don’t think that this contradicts the point just made. You can make a powerful announcement without sounding verbose. Which of these following sentences sounds best? “You will be happy you did this because you will make a lot of money.” Or, “Relaxing on your luxury yacht in years to come, you will know you made a truly life-changing decision.” There are no fancy words in the second one – nothing anyone would struggle to understand or find irritating – but it swaps a dead statement for one that engages the imagination and lends a momentous note to the occasion. "And Your Point Is?" Have you ever been faced with a salesperson who lists all the technical specifications of a product without telling you how any of the features will benefit you? Selling a product is not about describing its features; it is about explaining how those features will make your life better. It is about benefits that are personal to the individual. Effective copywriting should speak of the personal gains the product or service will offer. Let’s say you are asked to write copy for a company that sells running shoes. The new product has a revolutionary shock-absorbing sole (its USP). Would the customer want to know the chemical composition of the sole? Or would they want to know that it can reduce damage to joints and cartilage so that more frequent exercise can be taken so that more weight can be lost so that long-term health will improve so that longevity increases so that more time can be spent with the grandkids in later life? Of course you wouldn’t go that far with it, but the principle is sound; your intention is to alert your audience to the many benefits they will enjoy by choosing your client’s product over a rival’s. Appeal to the Emotions! This is where your artistry as a writer can come into its own. Although copywriting rules should be followed in a scientific manner because they have been proven to work, an ability to appeal to the customer’s emotions is a precious talent, and it can reap great financial rewards for yourself and your client. The literary skills of the copywriter will dictate how effective this will be, and it is certainly not necessary to write tear-jerking prose to achieve the desired result. In fact, one of the best ways to trigger the emotions is to do what was discussed in the point above: simply describe the positive benefits for the customer. People like to imagine themselves being happy and healthy so most of the hard work is already done; you just need to show them the way. Describe a scene that links the product with a happy outcome for the customer. To Your Success, YOUR NAME YOUR LINK